I understand you want a night time image, but your overall exposure is too dark.
You can keep it semi dark for the lower third for depth but make sure you exposure your image higher, your screen brightness might also be affecting your view I recommend you calibrate your monitor.
Your color shift is too far in the red as well. Here is a quick paint over I did but I cant get the full values since your clipping extremely on the far left of the curves.
https://ibb.co/BK001VN