I would suggest having more concrete goals for your prizes, so people have a clearer idea of what to expect for their donations. Currently it's unclear what type of models will be created and to what level of quality they will be created. Perhaps a list of what you intend to create in what order of priority, and what types of games you intend to design the models for. Also, I would be wary of making such sweeping statements that you will 'revolutionise the gaming industry' - let your productions speak for themselves and people will decide if they are revolutionary. Good luck.