Your prices are fair, but the guns look like someone made them in their basement out of sheet metal and not at all manufactured. The sights look realistic enough.
I try to sell guns. Please criticize my models.
Your prices are fair, but the guns look like someone made them in their basement out of sheet metal and not at all manufactured. The sights look realistic enough.
Hello there,
About the first model:
- It is not clear why the first render is cut off.
- Not the best choice of background for the gun model
- Weird angles and unnecessary shadows
- Very bad textures (especially considering Substance Painter mentioned in the description). The model with them does not look like a weapon, but like an old cheap keychain.
- Terrible mesh. The grip and box magazine areas cause soul freezing horror.
About the second model:
- All the same problems as with the first model, bad modeling. A detailed (relatively) sight and a very roughly made butt.
In general, a strong impression that the models were created very fast and carelessly.
Use high quality references and pay more attention to working out all the details of your models.
Learn more retopology and the texturing process with baking maps.
Regards.
Nice models
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